Larry Charles, writer on some of TV's greatest comedies. He's responsible for a lot of laughter, and this is your chance to have him critique your work.
Thank you everyone for the amazing feedback. This was a tough gig for me to take as an actor, but I feel the outcome was worth it. Merry Christmas to one and all! 24-12-11
Great short- the voice over IS necessary to get across the element of the father- otherwise the opening shot would imply that he was already abusing. A classy, complex piece, definite winner.
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I do appreciate this movie, the actorS.For this short story the essential is done, so GO AHEAD GOOD LUCK TOO..
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