Larry Charles, writer on some of TV's greatest comedies. He's responsible for a lot of laughter, and this is your chance to have him critique your work.
Chilly because realistic. I'd like to show that film in my Prison. Some of them feel naked without their knife. I have to attached my pencil sharpener to me. They have a different reaction from the boys of the film. They'd like to join the Army because they are paid to kill but the Army won't recruit ex prisonners.
its great. I agree the edit and focus could have been a little tighter, and for me it was begging for a reversal at the end, or some new hook ... the bite happens too soon and then seems laboured as nothing else is revealed... but good acting and a nice set up and atmosphere throughout.
It was an interesting premise, but it didn't quite grab me by the throat. I found my mind drifting about 5 minutes in mainly because I didn't care enough about the characters. I think it needs a tighter focus and edit - definitely a tighter edit.
A class of teenage schoolboys are oblivious to their teacher's attempts to question them about the wider world. They are about to get a lesson they will never forget ... one that will change their lives forever.
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