Larry Charles, writer on some of TV's greatest comedies. He's responsible for a lot of laughter, and this is your chance to have him critique your work.
Very cool. Your strongest performance was number 2, Johnno, suuu-perb! The lead wasn't miscast, the delivery just seemed a bit laboured, also the revelation needed a bit more oomph and underlining methinks, still really nice work, very clever.
I agree with David Lee, and i guest the end before seeing the poster on his car, other then that i liked it, having the skinny guy boss the others around was good, but wrongly cast, at times his accent was a bit to correct, if that makes any sense, ie "Bottled it"
It's getting tense. Dean, Jonno and Macca sit in the car, only moments before the job. But last time did not go well, and Jonno is having second thoughts...
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