Larry Charles, writer on some of TV's greatest comedies. He's responsible for a lot of laughter, and this is your chance to have him critique your work.
To start off I wasn't sure, the foley felt over the top and a bit out of place also I'm not the biggest fan of the hand shots. But I stuck with it and as a viewer I was rewarded, a very touching piece indeed! Well edited as well. Best of luck with this one.
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