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John David Clay

11 years, 2 months ago - John David Clay

just publish jcwriterscreen.weebly.com would welcome feedback from the downloadable pdfs EFCI is still very underdeveloped - more interested in perceptions of the others.

v good web building day last week slowly getting backing to scripting.

Thanks

John D Clay
Screenwriter / Cinematographer

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John David Clay

11 years, 2 months ago - John David Clay

David, thanks for the thoughts yes the Grammar and spelling does distract and its ongoing concern about that point taken!

the cell is quite nice in the loose approach I'm taking to writing it. I've I even got a actress in mind for the secondary part.

Thanks again

John

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David Rogers

11 years, 2 months ago - David Rogers

Hey there. I enjoyed reading the Cell- I like its sense of openness and how you leave room for the audience to interpret what's happening.

I feel it was distracting that the grammar and spelling needed attention in your script. Coming from a graphic design background, I learnt so quickly that even the best artistic expression in the world falls flat if it is a millimetre too far to the right.

Thanks for posting.

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