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INDEXLooking for Feedback on Script
4 months, 4 weeks ago - Kai Langford-Do
Hello,
I am currently working on a short film script, 'Part-Time Lovers' and am looking for some feedback as we move closer towards production. Specifically, I'm concerned that I haven't fleshed out the female character enough. It's really important I get this right and would greatly appreciate some help with this!
Logline: In a taxi to the airport, an insecure young man wants to find out what’s bothering his on-again, off-again girlfriend; frustrations and regrets arise as harsh truths threaten to destroy what’s left of their relationship.
If you're interested in lending a hand, don't hesitate to get in touch.
Thanks,
Kai
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4 months, 4 weeks ago - nathalie reiner
Hi Kay
I can have a read and give you some feedback: barbara111875@yahoo.co.uk
Send it to my email and I will get back to you
Cheers
Nathalie
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4 months, 4 weeks ago - Alex Ayling
Hi Kai,
If you want some feedback can give this a read, send it to my e-mail alexayling@hotmail.com.
Best,
Alex
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4 months, 4 weeks ago - Nikolay Malakhov
Hi Kai! I myself am working on a script and dealing with similar concerns where I have a cast of supporting characters and want to ensure they have personalities and individual motivations, and that it comes across for the readers of the script and viewers of the film. I understand the struggle.
Send me the script, I’ll share my feedback and potential suggestions nk.f17m@gmail.com
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4 months, 3 weeks ago - NICHOLAS PROSSER
Hello Kai,
Though I am now retired, I am quite happy to read your script. Apart from directing teelvision drama series and serials for 25 years with 400+ broadcast credits (+ some producing), ,more recently, I wrote short drama film screenplays with 2 produced, which I directed. Just send your script to me. My e-mail is nicholas.prosser@gmail.com
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4 months, 3 weeks ago - Claire S-B
I’m happy to look over this! Message me and I’ll send you my email x
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4 months, 3 weeks ago - Leszek Mozga
Hey,
happy to read it and give you feedback
leszek.mozga@gmail.com
Response from 4 months, 3 weeks ago - Leszek Mozga SHOW
4 months, 2 weeks ago - sevinc üçok
Hey Kay, I am an actor with solid understanding on character work, happy to read and reflect back on the female character if you'd like another P.O.V. Cheers
sevincucok@gmail.com
Sevinç
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4 months ago - Peter Spencer
Hi, I only saw this today. I'd be happy to help. Email info@petespencer.tv
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1 month, 2 weeks ago - Mike Sheer
Hello Kai! If you're still looking for someone to read please get in touch - there's info about what I can offer your script, and testimonials, here: https://www.mikesheer.net/script-editor
Cheers!
Mike
Response from 1 month, 2 weeks ago - Mike Sheer SHOW