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Would anyone be willing to read a short film script?

5 years, 2 months ago - Bhavi Satkunarasa

I'm currently working on a short horror/thriller script (roughly 10 minutes in length) and it's something I intend to shoot later on this year.

I'm currently on the fourth draft and I'm at a point where I really need fresh eyes and perspectives. I'd really like to tighten it up so I can get to that final draft but I know I need to identify the weak areas before I can do this.

Please let me know if you'd be up to lending your time/feeback for this and I would be eternally grateful, or read something of yours in return?

EDIT: Thank-you sooo much for all the replies, I'll be sending out the script today :)

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5 years, 2 months ago - David Hughes

Hi Shavi,

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5 years, 2 months ago - Alessandro Repetti

Of course. Send it over. :-)

Response from 5 years, 2 months ago - Alessandro Repetti SHOW

5 years, 2 months ago - Tess Hoffe

Hi Bhavi

I'll deffo read it for you.
Send it through.

Tessa

Response from 5 years, 2 months ago - Tess Hoffe SHOW

5 years, 2 months ago - Alvaro Flores

Happy to help. Alvaro

Response from 5 years, 2 months ago - Alvaro Flores SHOW

5 years, 2 months ago - Orin Beaton

I am happy to read and give you feedback Bhavi

Response from 5 years, 2 months ago - Orin Beaton SHOW

5 years, 2 months ago - Maeve Coffey

Hi I would love to have a read always like to look at new material and give feedback

Response from 5 years, 2 months ago - Maeve Coffey SHOW

5 years, 2 months ago - Tim Benjamin

I'd like to read it too, and I'm very happy to give you some constructive feedback.

Response from 5 years, 2 months ago - Tim Benjamin SHOW

5 years, 2 months ago - Leszek Mozga

Yes Please, especially if its thriller/ horror

Response from 5 years, 2 months ago - Leszek Mozga SHOW

5 years, 2 months ago - Len evans

OK email it to me Ill get back to you lenevans1000@aol.com
07957 887198

Response from 5 years, 2 months ago - Len evans SHOW

5 years, 2 months ago - Jerome Quiles

Happy to have a look

Response from 5 years, 2 months ago - Jerome Quiles SHOW

5 years, 2 months ago - Ronnie Mackintosh

Fire it over to info@ronniemackintosh.co.uk, Bhavi.

Response from 5 years, 2 months ago - Ronnie Mackintosh SHOW