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How a community post on SP led to a BAFTA-qualifying short

2 months, 2 weeks ago - Heather McQuaid

I wanted to share a little story—and a big thank you—to this community.

A couple of years ago, I was writing a lot—short stories, scripts, speculative ideas—but nothing I’d written had been made. Some of my scripts were even shortlisted on the Shooting People Script Pitch bulletin. But as a writer with no filmmaking experience, I couldn’t imagine making a short on my own.

Then I came across a post here on Shooting People. A director, Nuri Moseinco, was looking for short film scripts with low budgets, minimal locations, and emotional impact. I checked out his work—he’d won Best Director in a 48-hour film challenge and made some beautifully sensitive documentaries. What stood out wasn’t just the production quality—it was the space he created for emotion to build, the way he drew the audience into the characters’ inner lives.

I sent him a script—an adaptation of a short story called A Positive Contribution. It’s set in a near-future world where criminals have their memories wiped and replaced with more ‘positive’ ones to help them re-enter society.

He liked it, and we met for coffee. We realised we had similar sensibilities and ambitions, and—amazingly—we decided to make a film together.

We self-funded it: £5,000 split down the middle. I co-produced too, which I really enjoyed—getting involved in location scouting, auditions, casting, and even props and costumes. Using his experience and connections, Nuri assembled a fantastic crew. We refined the story together, aiming to make it as (believably) dramatic as possible in under 12 minutes—with multiple twists and an emotional gut punch.

One of the most exciting parts was being on set for the two-day shoot—watching a cast and crew of 14 bring our vision to life. And I got to see Nuri in action as a director, bringing the same patience, humour, and sensitivity on set as he did off. I couldn’t have asked for a better collaborator.

Since then, our little dystopian sci-fi A Positive Contribution has screened at 25 festivals worldwide—including BAFTA and BIFA qualifiers—and won Best Film at Coventry Phoenix FF.

We’re incredibly grateful to Shooting People—it brought together two strangers who now collaborate regularly. We’re currently working on a new short and developing A Positive Contribution into a TV pilot called Model Citizens.

If anyone has questions about adapting material, co-producing, or making the most of small spaces—we’re happy to chat.

You can see A Positive Contribution for free on Crafty Films’ YouTube channel from June 4th ( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NG3bgJMunfk)

Thanks again to this community for making creative collaborations like this possible.

— Heather (& Nuri)

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2 months, 2 weeks ago - cath le couteur

Ahh Heather - thanks so much for posting in and letting people know.
It's so great to hear stories like this. And what a cracking, and CHILLING film. Fantastic performances too.
Congrats to you, Nuri and all of your team - do keep everyone posted on the next one!
Chrs
Cath
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2 months, 2 weeks ago - Heather McQuaid

Thanks, Cath! Glad you enjoyed it. We're currently working on another short, hopefully shooting in July. So we'll let you (and the SP community) know how it goes. It's always a great learning experience.

Response from 2 months, 2 weeks ago - Heather McQuaid SHOW

2 months, 2 weeks ago - Adem Ay

Great work, Heather - a proper slice of Orwellian horror that manages to say so much in just 10 minutes. And so lovely to read about an SP screenwriter and an SP director hitting it off and making a beautiful film together. Looking forward to the next one.

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2 months, 1 week ago - Heather McQuaid

Hi Adem, thanks so much for watching and letting me know what you think. Yes, very Orwellian in tone!

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1 month, 3 weeks ago - Igor Ismail

Hi guys ! Do you need a good actor? My name is Igor Ismail. Instagram Igor Ismail please have a look !:)

Response from 1 month, 3 weeks ago - Igor Ismail SHOW

2 months, 2 weeks ago - Leila Lak

Great short film, congrats. I was totally gripped. Very nice to hear about the collaboration too. Good luck with your future projects.

Response from 2 months, 2 weeks ago - Leila Lak SHOW

2 months, 1 week ago - Heather McQuaid

Hello Leila! Really appreciate you watching it. Glad you found it engaging. :)

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2 months, 1 week ago - Theresa Godly

This has really made me smile! What a great story and thank you for sharing. I am a British south Asian writer/ producer/ actor. My first short is finishing its festival run soon and I’m producing another with three-time Oscar winning producer Kim Magnusson which we are shooting in Ohio this year. Also developing my short into a tv series.
I’d love to connect and collab with you, love your spirit! Well
Done to you both xx

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2 months, 1 week ago - Heather McQuaid

Thanks Theresa, and congrats on your short! Would love to connect. :)

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2 months, 1 week ago - Chung Isabel

Hi Heather,

Thanks for sharing your inspiring journey with A Positive Contribution it’s amazing to see how your collaboration has blossomed into so many opportunities!

What are you currently working on? Are you focusing more on developing Model Citizens into a TV pilot, or do you have other projects in the pipeline?

Looking forward to hearing more about your work!

Response from 2 months, 1 week ago - Chung Isabel SHOW

2 months, 1 week ago - Heather McQuaid

Hello, and thanks for responding. :)

I'm working on a few projects. I've finished a (good enough) draft of the Model Citizens pilot to share and get some feedback. Ideally I'd like to meet producers/production companies that are looking for character-driven dystopian sci-fi. Nuri and I will create a pitch deck in the meantime, so we're ready to send/discuss.

I'm co-producing a short that's Nuri's directing, and I've written 2 shorts that I'd like to get made. One of them requires a larger budget, so it's not something I can finance myself. The other one could be done on a small budget, so I'll explore getting that made while I keep applying for funding for the other.

What about you?

Response from 2 months, 1 week ago - Heather McQuaid SHOW

1 month, 3 weeks ago - Igor Ismail

Hi :) amazing story it took ma heart really ! That is why im here too! To collaborate with people of the same passion! I'm actor , my instagram is Igor Ismail!please have a look and may be I can be a good addition to your team ! Best wishes!

Response from 1 month, 3 weeks ago - Igor Ismail SHOW