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I will read your script and give you feedback for free!

2 years, 8 months ago - Yuki : the After Effect guy

I am a Japanese screenwriter and I want to become a screenwriting consultant in the future. I always try to study for a better script. But I do not know how well I am now. So I will read your script and give you feedback for free, you give me a feedback of how helpful that my feedback is :) Deal?

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2 years, 8 months ago - Brendan Cleaves

sure, whats your email?

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2 years, 8 months ago - Yuki : the After Effect guy

Thank you for your reply!
It is yukiwasaki1980@gmail.com
I am looking forward to reading your script!

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2 years, 8 months ago - Elie de Rosen

Hi Yuki. I'd love to take you up on your offer. I'm sending you a short script I've written.

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2 years, 8 months ago - Yuki : the After Effect guy

I received your script! And I am reading it now! I will send you my thoughts as soon as possible :)

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2 years, 8 months ago - Joe Crabtree

Sounds amazing! What is your email?

Cheers,

Joe

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2 years, 8 months ago - Yuki : the After Effect guy

I am glad you are interested!
My e-mail address is yukiwasaki1980@gmail.com
I am looking forward to reading your script!

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2 years, 8 months ago - David Roberts

Hi Yuki,

Are you looking to read anything particular in terms of length or genre?

Dave

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2 years, 8 months ago - Yuki : the After Effect guy

Hmmmm, I am trying to limit myself, so I am open to any genre and length. looking forward to reading your script!

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2 years, 8 months ago - Darren Brade

Hi Yuki

I have a short script if you’re still accepting?

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2 years, 8 months ago - Yuki : the After Effect guy

Absolutely! Send your script to yukiwasaki1980@gmail.com!
But do you have a deadline for it?

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2 years, 7 months ago - Yuki : the After Effect guy

I have read one of the member`s script and give him a feedback.
And he responded "I found your feedback really useful and insightful. It’s a process I’m glad I went through, and it’s definitely helped me see opportunities to improve my script."
This is a big one step for me for being helpful to write a script. If you have any problem for your script, feel free to ask me :)

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2 years, 7 months ago - Bianca Fiore

Hi Yuki,
Thanks for this opportunity. I'd like to send you my screenplay (feature film).
Shortly I'll send you the pdf via email :)

Bianca

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2 years, 7 months ago - Yuki : the After Effect guy

Hi, Bianca!
Thank you for your response!

I got your script! And I will read it through soon!
So wait for my feedback :)

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2 years, 7 months ago - Kevin Silva

Hi Yuki,
Are you still available to read my scipt?
Thanks,
Kevin S.

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2 years, 7 months ago - Yuki : the After Effect guy

Hi, Kevin!
Yes, absolutely!
Send me your script to my e-mail or friend request to my Facebook!
・E-mail
yukiwasaki1980@gmail.com
・Facebook
https://www.facebook.com/yuki.iwasaki.794

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2 years, 7 months ago - Kevin Silva

Hi Yuki,
Thanks, I'll send it over this morning. Let me know if you want me toread anything of your.
All the best,
Kev

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2 years, 7 months ago - Kevin Silva

By the way the script's called "Liza Rose".

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2 years, 7 months ago - Yuki : the After Effect guy

Hey, Kevin!
Thank you! But I haven`t received anything from you yet, but have you sent one to me?

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2 years, 6 months ago - Kevin Silva

Hi Yuki,
Just makng sure you got the script.
Thanks, Kev

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2 years, 5 months ago - Yuki : the After Effect guy

Hey, Kevin.
Sorry for the late reply.
I dont think I got your script, can you tell me your email address?

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2 years, 7 months ago - Aric Miller

Hi Yuki. This is great! I have a short film script I could share with you. Mind if I send it over?

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2 years, 7 months ago - Yuki : the After Effect guy

Hi, Aric!
Thank you for reaching me out!
No, worries!
Send your script to this email or facebook!

・E-mail
yukiwasaki1980@gmail.com
・Facebook
https://www.facebook.com/yuki.iwasaki.794

Looking forward to reading your script!

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2 years, 6 months ago - Sean Ramsden

Hi Yuki,

This sounds great. Are you still doing this for free by any chance? Would love to get some feedback.

Thank You,
Sean

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2 years, 5 months ago - Yuki : the After Effect guy

Hi, Sean!
Yes! But do you have any deadline? Because I am working on many scripts right now, so it might take a bit of time

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